Paper Doll
The paper doll was lovely,as she wore the latest cutout fashion while wearing a tiny cutout locket 'round her neck.The box said the lockethad a secret wish inside.I fumbled as I tried topry the...
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a very evocative piece, lizette ... thought-provoking and powerful and haunting in its tone ... I can't quite decide between a feeling of loss and a feeling of moving on ... perhaps, a mixture of both...
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This is beautiful Liz, a very creative write.. your imagery was wonderful...could really see the paper doll, and I found the end haunting and chilling as well... I really enjoyed this. Powerfully...
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It's been fun watching you growgetting better with each piecethis was poignantlovin thisERikThere's a blue bird at my windowI can't hear the songs he singsAll the jewels in heavenThey don't look the...
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Indeed, a lovely, thought provoking item... Well crafted, well done- S. Skrib'All we have to decide... is what to do with the time that is given to us.'- Gandalf, Lord of the Rings: Fellowship of the...
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This is great, your imagery is astounding! The feelings this arose in me were overwhelming; horror to panic to a sense of peace and back and forth. Strong piece, the ending, WoW!Enjoyed, take care.
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